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Title: In A Hotel Room
Universe: Marvel U.
Timeline: during the original Excalibur series.
Characters: Pete Wisdom, Kitty Pryde.
Rating: R.
Author's Note: This is for [profile] alileinwho asked me to write a story about Kitty and Pete that included the words pissoir, Greenland and freezer. It isn't exaclty what I wanted it to be, but I think it's okay. If Ali doesn't like it, she can request something else, anything she wants.
Word Count: 1037.

"It’s friggin cold," Kitty complained as she followed her boyfriend into the cheap motel room they had rented.

Pete threw himself onto the bed that creaked under his weight. "Told you already, no need to come with me."

Kitty rolled her eyes, took her coat off and hung it up on one of the two chairs that were in the small room. "And let you get yourself killed, Wisdom? Forget about it."

"I’ve been through this frequently, Kit. You may be the superhero, but I am the black ops agent and I know what I’m doing."

"Yeah, now that you say it, I have to admit that you’re pretty good at almost getting yourself killed." She went on unpacking, toothbrushes, her laptop, things that were necessary when travelling across Great Britain with your British boyfriend who had the special talent of getting himself and thus you into danger.

"Says Kitty Pryde who has made risking her life the most important thing in her world," Wisdom mocked. "At least I had a normal childhood."

"You call what you told me about your family normal?" Kitty sat on the bed, looking at Pete who was laying on his stomach on his side, the left. "God, you are so sick."

"Isn’t that why you’re with me?" He crawled towards his girlfriend and grabbed her by her wrists, moving quickly and managing to pin her down under him on the bed. He leaned closer to her, his breath felt warm against her face, his blue eyes flicked menacingly in a way that would frighten most of his enemies. "You can’t deny that you feel drawn to what everyone else feels disgusted by in me which makes you just as sick as I am."

"I didn’t see all the things you have stored away in your closet," she spat at him. Wisdom felt her slightly trembling under him, her breath was short and shallow; she didn’t know what he’d do and although she knew she could just phase if she wanted to get away from him, it didn’t seem to be enough to make her feel more comfortable in her position – not that Wisdom wanted that, it would have taken the fun out of it.

"You can roam around my closet as much as you want, you won’t find any skeletons in it, I’ve learned a long time ago that it’s a lot better to keep them in a freezer, this way they don’t decay." He brushed his lips against hers briskly, making his words sound even more macabre.

Kitty tried to back off, but didn’t succeed, there was no place to retreat to. She wasn’t going to use her powers yet, but Wisdom felt that he’d have to go on more carefully, after all she was just a girl, not even of age and not used to men like him – she wasn’t used to men at all which made the games Wisdom liked to play with her even more fun. He enjoyed getting her off the edge, seeing how far he could go before she retreated. Kitty Pryde had grown up facing all kinds of dangers, had thought a single person like Wisdom could never scare her; but the danger Pete Wisdom offered her was something she hadn’t known existed. It sparked fear in her, but at the same time excitement.

A few days ago, he had almost gotten her to have sex in a public toilet, he had just wanted to test how far she’d go considering some of her friends were in the bar with them. He had placed her on the sink right next to the pissoir and had managed to make her forget for a few minutes that someone she knew could walk in on them. Finally, when she had agreed to do it after they had made out for a while, Piotr had walked into the toilet which had embarrassed Kitty more than Wisdom had imagined possible. 

That was when he had grasped how much Kitty changed when her friends were around. She was afraid that they would disapprove of her actions and that was the reason why she felt attracted to Pete Wisdom, because he was so dirty, so nasty, so dark. When around him, she could do whatever she wanted to do, she could be whoever she wanted to be, and he wouldn’t judge her, it made him fall in love with her even more because he knew he had something of Kitty that belonged to no one but him.

He pressed himself closer to her slightly trembling body, thus nearly getting her to stop shaking, pulled her brown hair away from her ear so he could come close to it more easily He was about to whisper something very dirty into her ear that would surely make her blush when her communicator went off.

"Dammit!" Wisdom muttered while Kitty tried to roll herself out from under him but didn’t succeed and therefore decided to phase through him even though she knew he hated it.

She would rather have not answered the comm but had to.

Pete watched her from the bed, silently swearing to himself while she talked to Piotr, then hung up.

"What is it?" Wisdom asked more than slightly annoyed.

"Piotr is in Greenland."

"WHAT?!"

"As is the rest of the team."

"How did they end up there?"

"I don’t have the slightest idea – and neither does he, but he was asking if we could come to the rescue."

"What? No, of course we can’t, we’re busy," Wisdom snorted. "Why does that Soviet bastard always have to interrupt us even when we’re out of his reach?"

"Calm down, Pete," Kitty sighed, sitting down on the bed next to her British lover. "We’ll just go back to Muir, get the jet and go down and save them and when we come back, I’ll make it up to you." She placed a lofty kiss on his lips. He tried to pull her down to him but wasn’t successful.

"There’s no way for me to keep you here for a little longer, is there?"

She shook her head and got up.

He followed suit. "Then we should be heading out to Greenland, I guess."


Date: 2007-04-22 06:04 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] alilein.livejournal.com
Nath, how could I not like it? It's wonderful! Thank you very much. I will add this to my memories.

Date: 2007-04-23 03:35 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] nathskywalker.livejournal.com
You could maybe not like it because it is sick and twisted and disturbing in one part and the ending feels forced. I wanted to write a cute story about Wisdom and Pryde and look what it ended up being. You need to give me another challenge.

Date: 2007-04-23 08:09 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] alilein.livejournal.com
No, I like the end. And now stop fishing for compliments, you know it's good. If you want to write another story for me, then I'll think of another challenge.

Date: 2007-04-24 05:39 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] nathskywalker.livejournal.com
I am not fishing for compliments but pointing out my problems with what I wrote because if you don't have problems with what you write, you might as well stop doing it.
I'm happy that you like it, but as the author, I am just more critical of it.

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